Room 10 are taking part of the Get NZ Writing Challenge. We have been supplied a kit to help us create 32 amazing poems. When we have created out poems we will send them to another class somewhere in New Zealand. The exciting part is - the other class will send us their poems too.t
Our first activity was to write a poem about a colour. We chose the colour blue. Here is our amazing piece of collaborative writing:
Blue
The indigo blue sky was dotted with twinkling stars.
As I open the windows the bright, shiny blue sky shone into my eyes.
I look up and there is the bluest sky in the world.
The sky is blue without any clouds.
As I go outside, the shining blue sky lights up my eyes.
The blue sky is super, magnificently blue.
I lie down on the grass and look at the bright blue sky with cotton candy clouds.
A beautiful butterfly is flying in the blue sky.
I keep walking until I see a great big, sparkling blue waterfall.
The blue water is shining straight into my eyes.
When I look up into the blue sky I see fluffy clouds.
The blue sky is as beautiful as ever.
Blue is the colour of the sky and the ocean.
I see the blue sea waiting for me, bursting with life.
The blue water of the sea starts sparkling in the sun.
The cyan blue sky is reflecting off the water.
The blue ocean waves bash and tumble down on me.
I can see the blue, blue sky shining and sparkling.
The waves in the sea are as blue as the sky.
The dark blue ocean slides on to the sand.
I can see the light blue sky shining in my eyes.
The fresh cyan blue water is my favourite place to swim.
My favourite colour is blue.
Blue waves shimmer in the deep, dark ocean with rays of sunshine.
I have beautiful light and dark blue eyes.
Her eyes shimmered, a shining blue, as the sun sank into the clouds.
When I look in the blue sky, I see beautiful stars.
The beautiful blue sky with the twinkling stars is amazing.
Created by Room 10
Room 10 is a Year 5 and 6 class who are part of the Kauri Team, at Hamilton East School in New Zealand. Our kaiako is Alexander. This is where we will be sharing our learning journey.
Tuesday, 26 February 2019
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