My taniwha
The taniwha can see the adults doing a hui.
He hears the food cooking.
He thinks he is going to scare people.
He is rough and angry.
He looks around the marae and he feel hungry.
“I want a hangi.”
He looks at the food.
He scares them and they run away and they run to the bus.
Then they went back to school.
He looks slimy and green.
Written by Jahzique
TANIWHA MARAE WRITING - Rapare te 30 o Pouto-te-rangi // Thursday 30 March
The taniwha becomes ghost white for 1 second then converts to his invisible self when it taps its head! The only seen/visible part is the orange and big fire from its super long tail.
People got confused on why there is levitating fire, The taniwha is at the gateway crawling slowly to the front of the line being unpolite and evil. People from the marae greet Hamilton East School to the marae. Hamilton East School followed them to a meeting place. The taniwha heard cicadas, birds, and footsteps. The meeting ended, the taniwha went to the whare kai and started eating, It smelt delicious. He thought "I think I have eaten too much!", He stopped eating. He decided to look at Kapa Haka perform and it look 5 minutes, He thought "That was a good performance!" then he decided to scare some people, He found someone and became visible and shouted "Hello!" in a super sinister voice and started flying towards the random victim and started screaming super loud and it hurt everyone's ears. He stopped and became invisible and went into the bus with the kids and the bus driver was scared about the fire. He tried to remove it with some water but it reappeared 5 seconds after.
People got confused on why there is levitating fire, The taniwha is at the gateway crawling slowly to the front of the line being unpolite and evil. People from the marae greet Hamilton East School to the marae. Hamilton East School followed them to a meeting place. The taniwha heard cicadas, birds, and footsteps. The meeting ended, the taniwha went to the whare kai and started eating, It smelt delicious. He thought "I think I have eaten too much!", He stopped eating. He decided to look at Kapa Haka perform and it look 5 minutes, He thought "That was a good performance!" then he decided to scare some people, He found someone and became visible and shouted "Hello!" in a super sinister voice and started flying towards the random victim and started screaming super loud and it hurt everyone's ears. He stopped and became invisible and went into the bus with the kids and the bus driver was scared about the fire. He tried to remove it with some water but it reappeared 5 seconds after.
Written by James
I like how Jahzique said how he felt (eg. Hungry) and I like how he said what the taniwha smells (eg. Food). Next time you should add more detail.
ReplyDeleteBy James and Aniket